Band 9 model answer
With life expectancy rising and birth rates falling, many governments are debating whether citizens should remain in work for longer before drawing a pension. In my assessment, the advantages of raising the retirement age outweigh the disadvantages, provided the change is handled sensitively.
The principal benefit is economic sustainability. As the proportion of retirees grows, a shrinking workforce must support an expanding population of pensioners, placing severe strain on state finances. Keeping experienced employees in work for additional years widens the tax base and eases the pressure on pension systems that might otherwise become insolvent. Older workers also bring accumulated expertise and reliability that benefit employers and younger colleagues alike.
There are, of course, legitimate disadvantages. Physically demanding occupations take a toll on the body, and compelling labourers or nurses to continue into their late sixties may be both unfair and unsafe. A higher retirement age could also slow the progression of younger workers if senior posts remain occupied for longer. These concerns are real and deserve to be addressed.
However, such drawbacks can be mitigated through flexibility rather than a blanket rule. Allowing phased or part-time retirement, and exempting the most strenuous jobs, preserves the fiscal benefits while protecting those for whom prolonged work is genuinely unsuitable.
In conclusion, although raising the retirement age carries real risks for certain workers, its broader advantages for economic stability are more significant. With flexible and compassionate implementation, a higher retirement age is a reasonable response to the challenge of an ageing society.
Examiner’s notes
- The 'advantages outweigh disadvantages' question is answered with an explicit, qualified judgement that is never lost.
- Disadvantages are treated with genuine respect before being addressed through a practical solution, a Band 9 trait.
- Economic lexis is accurate and ambitious: sustainability, tax base, insolvent, phased retirement.