Band 9 model answer
There is a growing conviction that public health budgets should prioritise stopping illness before it starts rather than treating it after the fact. I strongly agree with this view, while recognising that treatment can never be neglected entirely.
The case for prevention is both humane and economically sound. Encouraging exercise, healthy diets and vaccination, alongside early screening, can stop many chronic conditions such as heart disease and diabetes from ever developing. This spares individuals immense suffering and saves health systems vast sums, since a vaccine or a screening test costs a fraction of prolonged hospital treatment. Public-health triumphs such as the near-eradication of polio through immunisation demonstrate how preventive spending delivers returns far beyond its initial cost.
Moreover, prevention addresses the root causes of ill health rather than merely its symptoms. Tackling smoking, obesity and pollution through education and regulation eases the long-term burden on overstretched hospitals, freeing resources for those who genuinely require acute care.
That said, a sensible system cannot abandon treatment. Accidents, genetic disorders and unforeseen epidemics will always demand high-quality curative medicine, and a purely preventive focus would leave the sick without recourse. The wisest policy, therefore, rebalances spending towards prevention without dismantling the treatment that remains indispensable.
In conclusion, I firmly believe that greater investment in prevention is the more rational and compassionate priority, because it reduces both human suffering and financial strain. Provided essential treatment is preserved, shifting the emphasis towards prevention represents the most effective use of limited healthcare funds.
Examiner’s notes
- The 'agree or disagree' task is answered with a strong, consistent stance that still acknowledges the limits of its own argument.
- Ideas are developed with relevant, concrete support (vaccination, polio) rather than vague generalisation.
- Vocabulary is fluent and precise: chronic conditions, eradication, curative, indispensable.