Band 9 model answer
As rates of obesity and diet-related illness climb, some governments are considering taxes on fast food and sugary products. I largely agree that such a measure is justified, although it cannot resolve the problem on its own.
The central argument in favour of taxation is that it discourages harmful consumption while funding the healthcare costs that poor diets create. Just as levies on tobacco have reduced smoking, higher prices on calorie-dense, nutritionally poor food can nudge consumers towards healthier choices. The revenue raised could subsidise fresh produce or fund public-health campaigns, creating a virtuous cycle in which the policy pays for its own remedies. The success of sugar taxes in countries such as Mexico, where consumption of sweetened drinks fell measurably, lends weight to this approach.
However, critics raise a fair objection: such taxes are regressive, weighing most heavily on low-income families who often depend on cheap, filling food. There is also a risk that determined consumers will simply absorb the higher cost rather than change their habits. A tax in isolation may therefore penalise the poor without delivering the intended health benefits.
In my view, the solution lies in pairing taxation with education and accessibility. A levy that makes unhealthy options dearer is most effective when nutritious alternatives are simultaneously made cheaper and when citizens understand the risks of poor diets.
In conclusion, I agree that taxing unhealthy food can play a valuable role in improving public health, but only as part of a broader strategy. Used alongside education and subsidies for healthy food, it can meaningfully shift behaviour without unfairly burdening the vulnerable.
Examiner’s notes
- A qualified position ('largely agree ... cannot resolve the problem on its own') directly answers the 'to what extent' task and is sustained.
- The counter-argument about regressive taxation is genuinely engaged with, not just mentioned, which lifts Task Response.
- Health-policy lexis is accurate: calorie-dense, regressive, levy, nutritious.