Band 9 model answer
The place of history within the school curriculum is a matter of ongoing dispute. Some maintain that every student should study the past, while others argue that the subject ought to be entirely optional. In my view, history is far too important to leave to individual choice and should therefore remain compulsory.
Those who would make history elective stress relevance and personal preference. They argue that a future engineer or doctor gains little from memorising distant dates and may understandably resent time diverted from vocationally useful subjects. Allowing pupils to specialise early, they claim, sustains motivation and enables deeper expertise in fields directly tied to their career ambitions. From this perspective, compulsion seems both inefficient and needlessly intrusive on a young person's freedom.
Proponents of mandatory history, however, present a far more compelling counterargument. History is not the rote recitation of dates but the disciplined study of how societies evolve, conflicts arise and ideas take root. Such knowledge cultivates critical thinking and informed citizenship, enabling young people to interpret current events and resist political manipulation. A populace ignorant of the past, they warn, is dangerously prone to repeating its gravest mistakes, from entrenched prejudice to outright political extremism.
Having weighed both sides carefully, I am firmly convinced that history must remain a core subject. While I respect the genuine case for early specialisation, the broader benefits of historical literacy clearly outweigh individual convenience. Understanding our shared heritage equips citizens to participate thoughtfully in democracy and to appreciate the rich diversity of human experience. Far from being a dispensable luxury, history furnishes the perspective every educated person requires, and for that reason its compulsory status is fully and unquestionably justified.
Examiner’s notes
- Task Response: both arguments are developed with depth and the writer reaches an unambiguous conclusion that history 'must remain a core subject', directly fulfilling the discuss-and-opinion task.
- Coherence and Cohesion: referencing and substitution ('From this perspective', 'they warn', 'Having weighed both sides') bind the essay tightly without overusing connectors.
- Lexical Resource: phrases such as 'informed citizenship', 'historical literacy' and 'dispensable luxury' show topical, idiomatic command of vocabulary at Band 9.