Band 9 model answer
Whether the press should be subject to firm regulation or left wholly unfettered is a perennial point of contention in democratic societies. Having carefully weighed both positions, I believe a free press is indispensable, yet it must operate within reasonable legal limits rather than enjoy absolute independence.
Proponents of strict regulation rightly stress the considerable harm that an unchecked press can inflict. Newspapers have hounded private individuals, fabricated stories and intruded upon personal grief purely for profit, ruining reputations while offering their victims little meaningful recourse. Advocates argue that enforceable codes of conduct, backed by genuinely meaningful penalties, are the only reliable way to deter such behaviour and protect ordinary people from a powerful industry that has repeatedly demonstrated its willingness to abuse its enormous reach.
Conversely, defenders of independence warn that heavy regulation inevitably invites censorship. A press that is answerable to the state may hesitate to expose official corruption or robustly challenge those in power, for fear of reprisal or the withdrawal of licences. Since fearless investigative journalism functions as a vital check on authority, they contend that the dangers of muzzling it far exceed the harm caused by occasional editorial excess, and that responsible self-regulation is consequently the safer path to follow.
In my view, both concerns are entirely legitimate, and the sensible solution lies in careful balance. The press should remain editorially independent of any government, but be firmly bound by clear laws against defamation and privacy violations, enforced by impartial courts. This carefully balanced dual arrangement preserves journalism's essential watchdog role over the powerful, while still granting wronged citizens genuine, accessible redress against genuine abuse.
Examiner’s notes
- Task Response: both contrasting views are explored even-handedly before the writer advances a clearly reasoned middle position, satisfying the discuss-both-views requirement fully.
- Coherence and Cohesion: the connectors 'Conversely' and 'In my view' clearly demarcate opposing arguments and the personal stance, while paragraphs are unified around a single controlling idea.
- Lexical Resource: judicial and media vocabulary such as 'unfettered', 'defamation', 'watchdog role' and 'redress' is deployed precisely and idiomatically.