Money & Consumerism

Advertising and Consumption

The question
Some people argue that advertising encourages consumers to buy things they do not really need and should therefore be more strictly controlled. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Band 9 model answer

Advertising saturates modern life, from billboards and television to the endless feeds of social media. Critics contend that it manipulates people into buying goods they neither need nor can afford, and ought to be reined in. I broadly agree that tighter regulation is justified, though an outright clampdown would be excessive.

There is compelling evidence that advertising actively fuels needless consumption. By cleverly associating products with happiness, status and belonging, marketers create artificial desires, persuading ordinary consumers that lasting contentment lies in the very next purchase. This is most troubling when it deliberately targets the impressionable, such as young children who pester their parents for the latest toy, or vulnerable adults lured into spiralling debt by glamorous credit offers. The cumulative effect is a damaging culture of overspending and waste that harms both household finances and the wider environment alike.

For these reasons, I support stricter controls in specific areas. Governments could rightly ban advertising aimed at young children, demand honesty in claims and curb the promotion of harmful goods such as gambling or junk food. Such measures protect the susceptible without infringing the legitimate freedom of businesses to inform the public about genuine products.

Nevertheless, I stop short of endorsing sweeping restrictions, because advertising also serves useful functions. It conveys real information about new and better products, sustains competition that drives down prices, and funds free media and online services that society values. A blanket suppression would therefore do more harm than good. In conclusion, while advertising undeniably stokes unnecessary consumption and warrants targeted regulation, particularly to shield the vulnerable, it should be moderated rather than muzzled.

Examiner’s notes

Power words for this topic

saturate
to fill something completely or excessively
In a sentenceAdvertising saturates almost every public space.
impressionable
easily influenced because of inexperience
In a sentenceAdverts often target impressionable young children.
stoke
to encourage or intensify a feeling or activity
In a sentenceMarketing stokes a desire for endless consumption.
susceptible
likely to be influenced or harmed by something
In a sentenceRules should protect the most susceptible consumers.