Band 9 model answer
For numerous developing nations, tourism is an economic lifeline that simultaneously erodes the very landscapes attracting visitors in the first place. Whether this welcome revenue truly justifies the resulting ecological damage is a genuine dilemma, and while I appreciate the financial argument, I largely disagree that short-term income can excuse lasting environmental harm.
The case for accepting the trade-off is far from trivial. In countries with few alternative industries, tourist spending funds the hospitals, schools and infrastructure that can lift millions of people out of poverty. Asking such nations to forgo this income for the sake of conservation can understandably seem a luxury that only already wealthy societies can comfortably afford. From this perspective, a measured degree of environmental sacrifice appears a reasonable price to pay for urgent human development.
Yet this reasoning is dangerously short-sighted. The natural assets that generate the revenue, the coral reefs, rainforests and unspoilt beaches, are finite, and once they are destroyed the income inevitably vanishes along with them. Trading irreplaceable ecosystems for a fleeting economic boom is therefore deeply self-defeating, effectively mortgaging a country's future to pay for its present. Crucially, this damage often proves wholly irreversible, leaving communities both poorer and stripped of their natural heritage.
In conclusion, although the economic appeal of tourism is genuinely undeniable, I cannot accept that it justifies open-ended environmental destruction. The far wiser course is sustainable tourism, in which a portion of revenue is deliberately reinvested in protecting the environment, ensuring that today's fragile prosperity does not quietly extinguish that of tomorrow. Income and conservation must therefore advance firmly together, or in the end both of them will ultimately collapse.
Examiner’s notes
- Task Response: the 'to what extent' question is answered with a nuanced 'largely disagree', and the writer acknowledges the economic case before rebutting it with a sustainability argument.
- Coherence and Cohesion: the pivot 'Yet this reasoning is dangerously short-sighted' marks the turn, while the financial metaphor of 'mortgaging the future' recurs to unify the argument.
- Lexical Resource: strong figurative and economic vocabulary such as 'economic lifeline', 'self-defeating' and 'open-ended environmental destruction' demonstrates Band 9 range.