Band 9 model answer
It is increasingly argued that consumers ought to favour locally grown food over imported alternatives. While I largely agree that local produce brings important benefits, I believe a rigid insistence on it would be both impractical and, in some respects, harmful.
There are compelling reasons to support local food. Transporting goods across continents generates substantial carbon emissions, so buying produce grown nearby shrinks one's environmental footprint considerably. Local purchasing also strengthens regional economies, sustaining farmers and preserving the rural landscape, while shorter supply chains mean fresher, more nutritious food reaches the table. For these reasons, prioritising local sources is, broadly speaking, a sensible and responsible choice.
However, an absolute commitment to local food is unworkable. Many countries simply cannot grow certain staples or fruits because of their climate, so refusing imports would leave diets monotonous and nutritionally poorer. Moreover, agricultural exports are a vital source of income for developing nations; boycotting them in the name of localism could deepen global poverty. There are even cases where importing food grown efficiently abroad produces fewer emissions than cultivating it in unsuitable local conditions under heated greenhouses.
In conclusion, although I agree that eating locally offers clear environmental and economic advantages and should be encouraged, treating it as an unbending rule ignores climatic realities and the livelihoods of overseas producers. The wisest approach is a balanced one: favour local produce where it is sensible to do so, but remain open to responsibly sourced imports that local agriculture cannot supply.
Examiner’s notes
- Task Response: the essay adopts a clear 'partly agree' position in the introduction and substantiates it with both supporting and qualifying paragraphs, fully addressing 'to what extent'.
- Coherence: contrast is managed elegantly through 'However' and the balancing conclusion, ensuring the reader follows the shift from agreement to qualification.
- Grammatical range and accuracy: varied structures including the comparative 'fewer emissions than cultivating it' and the cleft-like 'There are even cases where' show flexible, error-free control.