Band 9 model answer
For decades, rising gross domestic product has been the yardstick by which governments judge their success, and the relentless pursuit of growth dominates economic policy. While prosperity is undeniably important, I disagree that economic growth should be a nation's overriding goal, since it captures only a fraction of what makes a society flourish.
It would be foolish to deny the value of growth. A growing economy generates the jobs, tax revenues and investment that fund schools, hospitals and infrastructure, and history shows that sustained growth has lifted billions out of poverty. In poorer nations especially, expanding output remains the surest route to better living standards, so dismissing growth entirely would be reckless.
Nevertheless, treating it as the supreme objective is profoundly misguided. Growth measured purely by GDP ignores how wealth is actually distributed, so an economy can expand impressively while ordinary citizens grow poorer and inequality steadily widens. It also takes no real account of environmental destruction, often perversely counting the very pollution and resource depletion that imperil future generations as economic gains. Crucially, it overlooks the very things people value most, namely health, leisure, community and a clean environment, none of which ever appear on a national balance sheet.
In my view, therefore, governments should pursue broader measures of national well-being, such as health, education, sustainability and life satisfaction, with growth treated as a means rather than an end. In conclusion, although economic expansion brings real benefits and must not be neglected, it is too narrow to serve as a country's primary goal; genuine success lies in the holistic well-being of its people.
Examiner’s notes
- Task Response: the essay answers 'to what extent' with a clear, sustained disagreement, conceding the value of growth before convincingly arguing it should not be primary.
- Coherence and cohesion: the concession-rebuttal structure is marked by 'It would be foolish to deny...' followed by 'Nevertheless, treating it as the supreme objective is profoundly misguided', creating a tight logical pivot.
- Lexical resource: economically literate vocabulary such as 'gross domestic product', 'resource depletion' and 'holistic well-being' is deployed with accuracy and confidence.