Band 9 model answer
In assessing a young person's potential, opinion is divided over whether examination grades or practical competencies deserve greater weight. Some regard high marks as the truest gauge of ability, while others prioritise hands-on skills. In my view, although grades have value, practical skills are ultimately more decisive in life.
Those who exalt academic results argue that grades offer an objective, standardised yardstick. A consistent record of high marks signals intelligence, diligence and the capacity to master complex material, qualities that universities and employers can readily compare. Examinations, they add, instil discipline and provide a fair basis for selecting candidates from vastly different backgrounds. For careers in research or medicine, such rigorous academic credentials are unquestionably essential.
Conversely, champions of practical ability point out that real-world success seldom hinges on test scores alone. Communication, problem-solving, teamwork and technical proficiency frequently determine whether a person thrives in the workplace. A brilliant theorist who cannot collaborate or apply knowledge practically may flounder, whereas a less academically gifted individual with strong practical instincts often excels. History is replete with accomplished entrepreneurs whose grades were unremarkable.
Weighing both perspectives, I lean towards the latter. Grades undoubtedly open doors, but they capture only a narrow slice of human capability. Life rewards those who can think on their feet, work with others and translate ideas into action. The wisest education, therefore, balances academic rigour with the cultivation of practical competence, yet if forced to choose, I consider transferable skills the more enduring asset.
Examiner’s notes
- Task Response: both views are developed thoroughly and a clear, sustained opinion ('practical skills are ultimately more decisive') is stated in the introduction and reaffirmed in the conclusion.
- Coherence and Cohesion: balanced contrast through 'Those who exalt', 'Conversely' and 'Weighing both perspectives' guides the reader and signposts the writer's evolving argument.
- Lexical Resource: refined diction such as 'objective, standardised yardstick', 'flounder' and 'transferable skills' demonstrates the lexical sophistication of a Band 9 response.