Band 9 model answer
Recycling has become the emblem of environmental responsibility in households worldwide, yet sceptics question whether it genuinely moves the needle. While I acknowledge that recycling alone is inadequate, I disagree that it is ineffective; rather, it is a valuable but incomplete part of the solution.
There is force in the argument that recycling is overrated. A significant proportion of material placed in recycling bins is ultimately contaminated, landfilled or exported to countries that incinerate it. Plastics in particular can only be reprocessed a limited number of times before degrading, and the energy required to collect and treat waste partly offsets the environmental savings. Critics reasonably conclude that recycling can lull the public into complacency, distracting from the more urgent need to consume less.
Nonetheless, dismissing recycling outright is misguided. When materials such as aluminium, glass and paper are properly recovered, the energy and raw resources saved are substantial, and well-run schemes demonstrably reduce the volume of waste reaching landfill. The shortcomings stem less from the principle of recycling than from poor implementation, weak infrastructure and consumer confusion, all of which are correctable.
In conclusion, I partly agree that recycling is insufficient on its own, but I reject the claim that it is futile. The wiser response is to strengthen recycling systems while prioritising the reduction and reuse of materials further up the waste hierarchy. Recycling is not a panacea, yet it remains a meaningful instrument when embedded within a broader culture of restraint.
Examiner’s notes
- Task Response: the position is nuanced and clear, distinguishing 'inadequate' from 'ineffective' and sustaining that distinction through to a precise conclusion.
- Coherence and Cohesion: balanced contrast is managed with 'There is force in the argument' followed by 'Nonetheless, dismissing recycling outright is misguided', signposting each shift clearly.
- Lexical Resource: idiomatic and precise phrasing such as 'moves the needle', 'lull the public into complacency', 'waste hierarchy' and 'panacea' reflects Band 9 range.