Band 9 model answer
As multinational food brands and foreign cuisines penetrate markets everywhere, the distinctive diets that once defined particular cultures are steadily fading. While this trend carries certain advantages, I regard the gradual loss of traditional diets as a predominantly negative development.
It would be unfair to ignore the benefits of this culinary globalisation. The arrival of international food expands choice, allowing people to enjoy flavours and ingredients their grandparents never encountered. It can also improve nutrition, since access to a wider variety of produce may correct deficiencies common in narrow, traditional diets. For many, sampling global cuisine is an enriching experience that broadens cultural horizons and fosters tolerance.
Nonetheless, the disappearance of traditional diets entails serious losses. Long-established eating patterns embody centuries of accumulated wisdom, often being well suited to local climates and remarkably healthy; their replacement by standardised processed food has coincided with rising obesity and chronic disease across the developing world. Beyond nutrition, cuisine is a cornerstone of identity, binding families and communities through shared rituals and recipes. As these vanish, societies forfeit not merely dishes but a vital strand of their cultural heritage, growing more uniform and less distinctive.
In conclusion, although the spread of global food brings welcome variety and occasional nutritional gains, these are outweighed by the damage to public health and the erosion of cultural identity that the decline of traditional diets represents. Communities should therefore actively preserve their culinary heritage, treating it not as a relic of the past but as a living asset worth defending.
Examiner’s notes
- Task Response: the essay gives a clear verdict ('predominantly negative') while acknowledging the opposing benefits, fully addressing the positive-or-negative question type.
- Cohesion: the contrast is signalled by 'Nonetheless', and the conclusion weighs the two sides explicitly ('outweighed by') rather than simply restating them.
- Lexical resource: expressive collocations such as 'culinary globalisation', 'cornerstone of identity' and 'a living asset' display the range and precision of a Band 9 candidate.