Band 9 model answer
As corporate sponsorship steadily eclipses state funding across many fields of science, the priorities driving research are shifting visibly from collective welfare towards commercial return. Although private money undeniably brings valuable resources, I regard this trend overall as a predominantly negative development for society as a whole.
The central problem here is one of fundamentally misaligned incentives. Companies, by their very nature, pursue research that promises profit, which means that lucrative areas such as cosmetic products and lifestyle drugs attract abundant investment, while neglected tropical diseases afflicting the poor are routinely overlooked. When the marketplace alone dictates the scientific agenda, knowledge that yields little revenue but great social value risks being abandoned or starved of funds altogether.
A further and equally serious concern is the potential erosion of scientific integrity. Findings that threaten a sponsor's commercial interests may quietly be suppressed or subtly distorted, as history has repeatedly shown with research funded by the tobacco and fossil-fuel industries. Once the public begins to suspect that conclusions have effectively been bought, trust in science as an impartial arbiter is corroded, with deeply damaging consequences for evidence-based policy.
Nonetheless, I would not dismiss private funding entirely, for it has undeniably accelerated breakthroughs that cash-strapped governments could never have financed on their own. The remedy, in my judgement, is not to reject corporate money outright but to counterbalance it deliberately. Governments must continue to underwrite curiosity-driven and socially essential research, while firmly insisting on full transparency about who funds what. In this way the dynamism of the private sector can be harnessed without surrendering science wholesale to the dictates of the balance sheet.
Examiner’s notes
- Task Response shows a clear stance ('predominantly negative') that is developed with two distinct arguments and a balanced concession, fully satisfying the positive/negative prompt.
- Cohesion is natural and varied, using 'A further and equally serious concern', 'Nonetheless' and 'in my judgement' to manage the flow without overusing connectors.
- Lexical resource includes precise collocations such as 'misaligned incentives', 'impartial arbiter' and the metaphorical 'dictates of the balance sheet'.