Band 9 model answer
In a growing number of homes, packaged convenience foods have supplanted meals cooked from fresh ingredients. This essay will explain why this shift is occurring and assess its effects on both individuals and family life.
The reasons for the change are largely practical. Modern households are increasingly time-poor, with both parents often working full time and children burdened by busy schedules, leaving little opportunity for the lengthy process of cooking from scratch. Convenience foods, which need only be heated, offer an obvious solution. In addition, relentless advertising portrays such products as affordable and effortless, while a steady decline in cooking skills, passed down less reliably between generations, means many people now lack the confidence to prepare fresh dishes at all.
The effects of this trend are considerable and largely troubling. On an individual level, processed foods tend to contain high levels of salt, sugar and additives, contributing to obesity and related illnesses that diminish quality of life. For families, the consequences extend beyond health. The shared ritual of preparing and eating a home-cooked meal has long fostered communication and closeness, and its erosion can weaken the bonds between family members, who increasingly eat separately and hurriedly.
In conclusion, the rise of convenience food is driven chiefly by busy lifestyles, persuasive marketing and declining culinary skills, and its effects are predominantly negative, harming personal health and loosening family ties. Reviving an appreciation for fresh, communal cooking would therefore benefit both bodies and relationships.
Examiner’s notes
- Task Response: the essay answers both questions — causes and effects on two named groups — with the second body paragraph explicitly distinguishing individual from family impacts.
- Coherence and cohesion: clear topic sentences and signposts like 'The reasons', 'In addition' and 'On an individual level' organise a cause-then-effect progression.
- Lexical resource: idiomatic and precise expressions such as 'time-poor', 'cooked from scratch' and 'loosening family ties' reflect natural, sophisticated usage.