Band 9 model answer
Across much of the world, physical activity has declined dramatically as people spend their waking hours seated at desks and screens. This essay will explore the reasons behind this sedentary shift and outline its serious consequences for public health.
The causes lie largely in the transformation of work and leisure. Automation and the growth of office-based employment mean that most jobs now demand little more than sitting at a computer, whereas manual labour once kept bodies active. At the same time, digital entertainment has displaced more energetic pastimes; instead of playing outside, people stream films and scroll through social media for hours. The convenience of cars and home delivery further removes everyday opportunities for movement, so inactivity becomes the path of least resistance.
The health consequences of this trend are alarming. Prolonged sitting is strongly associated with obesity, type-two diabetes and cardiovascular disease, because the body burns few calories and circulation slows. Beyond physical ailments, a sedentary routine takes a psychological toll, as a lack of exercise is linked to higher rates of depression and poorer sleep. Perhaps most worrying, these habits are forming in childhood, condemning a generation to chronic illness far earlier than their parents.
In conclusion, modern work, screen-based leisure and effortless transport have together produced an epidemic of inactivity, with grave effects ranging from heart disease to deteriorating mental health. Reversing this trend will require deliberate effort to weave movement back into daily life.
Examiner’s notes
- Task Response: the two requirements, causes and effects, are each developed in full paragraphs with relevant, extended support.
- Cohesion: causal links such as 'so inactivity becomes the path of least resistance' and 'because the body burns few calories' bind ideas tightly.
- Lexical Resource: medical and descriptive precision in 'cardiovascular disease', 'sedentary routine' and 'path of least resistance' lifts the response.