Band 9 model answer
In the space of a single generation, flying has been transformed from a rare luxury into a routine purchase, thanks largely to the rise of budget airlines. Although this striking democratisation of travel brings undeniable benefits, I believe its environmental and social drawbacks now clearly outweigh them.
The advantages are easy to appreciate. Cheap fares have opened the skies to ordinary families who could once only dream of foreign holidays, broadening horizons and strengthening ties between relatives scattered across continents. Economically, the influx of affordable visitors has revitalised regional airports and tourist towns, creating much-needed jobs in places that previously struggled to attract investment of any kind. For many isolated communities, the budget carrier has been nothing short of an economic lifeline.
These gains, however, come at a steadily mounting price. Aviation is a significant and fast-growing source of carbon emissions, and rock-bottom fares positively encourage the kind of casual, frequent flying that a warming climate can ill afford. The same convenience has also fuelled rampant over-tourism, with cheap weekend breaks swamping fragile cities and inflating local rents beyond residents' reach. In short, ticket prices that wholly ignore the true environmental cost of flying have quietly externalised that cost onto everyone else.
Weighing these considerations together, I conclude that the disadvantages now firmly predominate. Although low-cost travel has undoubtedly enriched countless lives, the long-term planetary bill is becoming genuinely unsustainable. A fairer system, in which fares honestly reflect their environmental costs through carbon taxes, would carefully preserve the genuinely cherished social benefits of flying while firmly curbing its most reckless and environmentally damaging excesses.
Examiner’s notes
- Task Response: the 'do advantages outweigh disadvantages' prompt is answered directly with a stated verdict, and both sides are weighed before the conclusion confirms the position.
- Coherence and Cohesion: the contrast hinges neatly on 'These gains, however, come at a steadily mounting price', and ideas are linked with 'In short' and 'Weighing these considerations'.
- Lexical Resource: economical, precise vocabulary including 'democratisation of travel', 'externalised that cost' and 'reckless and damaging excesses' lifts the response to Band 9.