Society & Equality

Workplace Discrimination

The question
Despite laws designed to prevent it, discrimination against certain groups of workers still occurs in many companies. What are the causes of this problem, and what measures could reduce it?

Band 9 model answer

Even where legislation explicitly forbids it, the unfair treatment of employees on grounds of gender, ethnicity, or age stubbornly persists across countless workplaces around the world. This essay examines why such bias endures despite legal protection and proposes a number of practical steps that could meaningfully curb it.

The principal cause lies in unconscious assumptions that operate beneath formal rules. Managers frequently favour candidates who resemble themselves, mistaking familiarity for competence, while long-standing stereotypes lead them to underestimate certain groups before any work is assessed. A secondary factor is the gap between law and culture: regulations may prohibit overt prejudice, yet they cannot easily reach the informal comments, exclusionary networks, and promotion decisions made behind closed doors. Where accountability is weak, discriminatory habits quietly reproduce themselves.

Addressing the problem therefore demands intervention at both the individual and institutional level. Structured recruitment, in which applications are anonymised and assessed against fixed criteria, strips away much of the room for bias to operate. Equally important is transparent data: when firms are required to publish pay and promotion figures broken down by group, hidden imbalances become visible and embarrassing, creating pressure to reform. Training that confronts unconscious bias can also help, provided it is reinforced rather than treated as a one-off formality.

In conclusion, workplace discrimination survives largely because deep-seated attitudes and informal habits outlast the statutes meant to govern them. The most effective remedies, therefore, are those that reduce subjective judgement and ruthlessly expose unfair patterns to public scrutiny. Laws alone are plainly insufficient on their own; only when fairness is deliberately built into everyday procedures and then rigorously monitored over time will genuine equality of treatment finally be achieved.

Examiner’s notes

Power words for this topic

unconscious
happening without one being aware of it
In a sentenceUnconscious bias shapes many hiring decisions.
overt
done openly and not concealed
In a sentenceLaws prohibit overt prejudice but miss subtler bias.
accountability
the obligation to answer for one's actions
In a sentenceWeak accountability lets discrimination reproduce itself.
transparent
open and easy to see or examine
In a sentenceTransparent pay data exposes hidden imbalances.