Band 9 model answer
As migration and globalisation reshape classrooms, many educators advocate teaching children in two languages from their earliest years, while others warn that this overburdens developing minds. Having weighed both positions, I believe the benefits of early bilingual education clearly outweigh the risks.
Supporters of bilingual schooling cite compelling cognitive and social advantages. Children exposed to two languages young typically achieve near-native fluency in both, a feat that becomes far harder in later life. Beyond communication, bilingualism is associated with enhanced problem-solving, better concentration and even delayed cognitive decline in old age, while also opening doors to wider cultural understanding and, eventually, employment. A child fluent in two languages effectively inherits two windows onto the world.
Those who object, however, raise concerns that deserve a hearing. They argue that juggling two linguistic systems can initially slow a child's progress, producing a smaller vocabulary in each language and occasional confusion between them. For children already struggling academically, sceptics contend, a second language may add pressure rather than enrichment, and poorly resourced bilingual programmes can leave pupils mastering neither tongue properly. The risk is greatest where one language is undervalued or rarely used at home.
In my judgement, these reservations describe risks of bad implementation rather than flaws in the concept itself. Research consistently shows that any early vocabulary gap closes quickly and is dwarfed by the long-term gains, provided teaching is well structured and adequately supported. I therefore firmly favour bilingual education, while insisting it be delivered by trained teachers and tailored to each child's pace, so that the considerable advantages are realised without the pitfalls the critics rightly identify.
Examiner’s notes
- Task Response: the prompt's two views are explored even-handedly in dedicated paragraphs, and a decisive opinion is supplied and justified in the conclusion, meeting all parts of the task.
- Grammatical Range: the writer controls a range of complex forms, including the participle opener 'Having weighed both positions' and the conditional 'provided teaching is well structured'.
- Lexical Resource: precise educational vocabulary such as 'near-native fluency', 'cognitive decline' and 'enrichment' conveys ideas economically and accurately.