Band 9 model answer
With teenagers spending hours daily exchanging abbreviated messages, many fear that this casual register is eroding their command of formal writing. While I accept that careless habits can spill over, I largely disagree that digital language is fundamentally damaging young people's literacy.
Those who sound the alarm have a reasonable concern. When a student habitually writes 'u' for 'you' or omits punctuation entirely, these shortcuts may occasionally surface in essays or job applications, creating an unprofessional impression. If young writers never practise standard conventions, the worry runs, they may struggle to switch registers when formality is required, and employers do report frustration at sloppy applications.
However, this fear tends to exaggerate the danger and underestimate young people's adaptability. Most teenagers are perfectly capable of code-switching, deploying playful slang with friends while producing polished prose for an exam, in much the same way that adults speak differently at a party than in a courtroom. Indeed, the digital age has arguably made young people write more than any previous generation, and constant composition, however informal, can sharpen their instinct for audience and tone. Inventive abbreviations even demonstrate a playful command of language rather than ignorance of it. The real determinant of writing ability remains good teaching, not the existence of abbreviations.
In conclusion, although the informal language of texting can leak into formal contexts if left unchecked, it does not inherently corrupt young people's writing. The solution lies in explicitly teaching students when each register is appropriate, rather than in condemning the platforms they enjoy. Treated sensibly, digital communication is better understood as additional practice than as a threat to literacy, and I therefore reject the more alarmist view.
Examiner’s notes
- Task Response: a consistent 'largely disagree' position is maintained, with the opposing concern acknowledged in full before being convincingly rebutted with reasoned counter-arguments.
- Cohesion: the everyday courtroom-versus-party analogy and connectives like 'Indeed' and 'However' bind concession and rebuttal smoothly without overusing mechanical signposts.
- Lexical Resource: register-specific terms such as 'code-switching', 'switch registers' and 'alarmist' are used accurately, showing topical precision and lexical control.