Band 9 model answer
As keyboards and touchscreens dominate modern life, handwriting is increasingly treated as an optional skill, and some schools have abandoned teaching it altogether. Although typing offers obvious practical gains, I regard the wholesale neglect of handwriting as a predominantly negative trend.
The appeal of prioritising typing is understandable. Digital text is faster to produce, easy to edit and instantly shareable, and since most adult work is now conducted on screens, equipping children with strong keyboard skills prepares them realistically for the workplace. Time spent drilling cursive, the argument runs, could be devoted to coding or critical thinking instead, and typing also levels the field for children with poor motor coordination.
However, this reasoning overlooks the developmental value embedded in forming letters by hand. Studies indicate that the physical act of writing strengthens fine motor control and, more strikingly, deepens memory and comprehension, because the brain processes information more thoroughly when we write than when we tap. Students who take notes by hand, for example, tend to recall and synthesise ideas better than those who type them verbatim. Handwriting also preserves a personal, expressive dimension of communication, from a signed birthday card to a private journal, that uniform digital fonts cannot convey. A generation unable to write legibly risks losing both a cognitive aid and a distinctive form of self-expression.
On balance, while typing is an indispensable modern competence, it should supplement rather than supplant the pen. The ideal approach is plainly to teach both, allowing children to enjoy the speed of the keyboard without forfeiting the cognitive and personal benefits of writing by hand. Discarding handwriting entirely, therefore, sacrifices too much for the sake of convenience, and I consider it a development to be resisted rather than welcomed.
Examiner’s notes
- Task Response: the essay answers the positive/negative question directly with a qualified judgement ('predominantly negative') and justifies it through balanced reasoning before a firm conclusion.
- Grammatical Range: structures vary from the embedded clause 'the argument runs' to the parallelism of 'supplement rather than supplant', demonstrating flexible, error-free control.
- Lexical Resource: well-chosen items such as 'wholesale neglect', 'indispensable competence' and 'supplant' convey precise meaning and elevate the register.