Band 9 model answer
Linguists estimate that a language dies roughly every fortnight, prompting debate over whether public funds should be devoted to rescuing them. While the resources involved are not trivial, I ultimately side with those who regard preservation as a worthwhile investment.
Those who oppose such spending advance a pragmatic case. Public budgets are finite, and money channelled into reviving a tongue spoken by a few hundred elderly people might arguably save lives if redirected to hospitals or schools. Furthermore, sceptics contend that languages naturally rise and fall, and that resisting this evolution is both costly and ultimately futile. From this perspective, sentiment should not override sober economic priorities, especially in nations where basic services remain underfunded.
Proponents of preservation, however, point to values that resist monetary measurement. A language is not merely a tool for ordering coffee; it is a repository of a community's stories, ecological knowledge and worldview, much of which vanishes irretrievably once the last speaker dies. Indigenous tongues, for instance, often encode detailed botanical knowledge that science is only beginning to appreciate. Modest investment in documentation, bilingual schooling and digital archives can keep this heritage alive while also strengthening the identity and self-esteem of marginalised groups, with measurable benefits for their wellbeing.
Weighing these positions, I find the cultural argument more persuasive, provided the spending is proportionate. Governments need not lavish fortunes on every dialect, but targeted funding for recording and teaching at-risk languages safeguards an irreplaceable inheritance at relatively low cost. Such programmes can even bring economic returns through cultural tourism and stronger community cohesion. Since a vanished language can never be recovered, the modest expense of prevention strikes me as far wiser than the permanent loss of a unique way of seeing the world.
Examiner’s notes
- Task Response: both views are developed with equal depth in separate paragraphs before a clearly reasoned personal opinion emerges, exactly as the discuss-both-views instruction requires.
- Coherence: each body paragraph opens with a topic-signalling phrase ('Those who oppose', 'Proponents of preservation, however') that maps the structure transparently for the reader.
- Grammatical Range: the writer handles complex structures fluently, including the concessive 'provided the spending is proportionate' and the inversion-free conditional 'Since a vanished language can never be recovered'.