Band 9 model answer
With major cities buckling under congestion and unaffordable rents, some argue that governments should actively steer people towards smaller towns. In my view, the benefits of such a policy clearly outweigh its drawbacks, provided it is pursued through incentive rather than compulsion.
The advantages are considerable. Redistributing population would relieve the pressure on overstretched cities, easing traffic, lowering rents and reducing pollution for those who remain. Smaller towns themselves would gain a vital injection of residents, spending and skills, reversing the decline that has hollowed out so many provincial communities. The newcomers, meanwhile, would typically enjoy cheaper housing, cleaner air and a slower pace of life, an appealing exchange for many families weary of urban grind.
The drawbacks, though real, are largely manageable. The chief risk is economic: small towns may lack the jobs and services needed to retain people, so a poorly planned scheme could simply relocate unemployment. Critics also warn that some will resist leaving the cultural buzz of the city. Yet both objections fade if government couples relocation with genuine investment, funding businesses, transport links and broadband so that towns become attractive rather than merely cheap.
In conclusion, while encouraging movement to smaller towns carries economic risks, these can be neutralised through careful planning and targeted investment. The resulting relief for cities and revival for towns make the benefits decisively greater, making this a policy well worth pursuing.
Examiner’s notes
- Task Response: the response directly answers the 'do benefits outweigh drawbacks' question, quantifying the verdict ('decisively greater') and adding the sensible caveat of 'incentive rather than compulsion'.
- Coherence and Cohesion: a clear benefit-then-drawback structure is used, and 'The drawbacks, though real, are largely manageable' transitions smoothly while previewing the rebuttal.
- Lexical Resource: idiomatic, formal lexis such as 'hollowed out', 'urban grind' and 'a vital injection of residents' demonstrates range without strain.