Band 9 model answer
Across the developing world, rural populations are draining steadily into urban centres, often faster than those cities can absorb them. This essay will examine why the movement occurs before proposing two practical remedies that target its underlying drivers.
The migration is fuelled chiefly by economic disparity. Rural economies typically revolve around agriculture, which offers seasonal, poorly paid and increasingly mechanised work, whereas cities promise factory jobs, services and higher wages. Beyond income, young people are drawn by superior schools, hospitals and the sheer variety of urban life, none of which their villages can match. In short, the countryside repels while the city attracts, and ambition does the rest.
The most effective response is to make rural areas worth staying in rather than simply restricting movement. Governments could decentralise investment, situating manufacturing plants, universities and clinics in provincial towns so that opportunity is no longer concentrated in a single metropolis. Improved roads and reliable internet would further allow rural residents to access markets and remote employment without uprooting their families. A complementary measure is to modernise farming itself, subsidising equipment and training so that agriculture becomes a viable career rather than a last resort.
In conclusion, rural-to-urban migration stems primarily from the gulf in earnings and amenities between village and city. Because the impulse is rational, the solution lies not in coercion but in spreading prosperity outward, thereby giving people a genuine reason to remain where they were born.
Examiner’s notes
- Task Response: the essay fully addresses both the 'causes' and 'measures' halves of a two-part question and keeps each in its own paragraph, ensuring balanced, fully developed coverage.
- Coherence and Cohesion: cohesion is achieved through meaning rather than mechanical linkers, e.g. 'the countryside repels while the city attracts' and 'A complementary measure', which signal logical relationships naturally.
- Lexical Resource: precise topic lexis such as 'decentralise investment', 'mechanised', 'a single metropolis' and 'a last resort' demonstrates the flexible, collocation-rich vocabulary expected at Band 9.