Band 9 model answer
A long-running debate in language teaching pits the explicit drilling of grammar rules against the belief that grammar is best absorbed naturally through exposure. Each philosophy has produced successful learners, yet I am persuaded that a blended approach, leaning on explicit instruction for clarity, serves most students best.
Advocates of explicit teaching argue that rules give learners a reliable framework. When a teacher clearly explains, for instance, how a tense is formed and then sets targeted exercises, students gain conscious control that lets them self-correct and apply patterns to new sentences. This is especially valuable for adults, whose analytical minds often crave the reassurance of understanding the logic before producing it confidently, and for those preparing for formal examinations.
The opposing camp counters that real fluency is acquired, not memorised. Children master their first language flawlessly without a single grammar lesson, simply by hearing and using it, and excessive rule-focus can leave learners able to pass tests yet hesitant in conversation. Heavy grammar drilling, they warn, may also drain enjoyment and make speech stilted as students anxiously monitor every word. Genuine communication, on this view, flourishes only when learners stop dissecting the language and start using it.
My own conviction is that the two approaches are complementary rather than contradictory. Abundant reading and conversation are indispensable for building intuitive fluency, but a measured dose of explicit grammar accelerates progress and prevents persistent errors, particularly for older learners short of time. The wisest teachers, therefore, embed clear rules within plentiful meaningful practice, harnessing the precision of explicit instruction and the naturalness of immersion to achieve the strengths of both.
Examiner’s notes
- Task Response: the discuss-both-views task is fully met, with each pedagogical camp explained sympathetically before a clearly reasoned, balanced personal stance is reached.
- Grammatical Range: the writer deploys varied complex structures, such as the contrast 'acquired, not memorised' and the non-finite clause 'leaning on explicit instruction for clarity', accurately.
- Lexical Resource: subject-appropriate terms including 'explicit instruction', 'intuitive fluency' and 'self-correct' are used with precision, signalling a wide and controlled vocabulary.