Band 9 model answer
As cities expand, residents increasingly face a stark choice between a flat in a soaring tower and a house on the leafy fringe. Both options have devoted supporters, and below I weigh each before explaining why, on balance, I lean towards high-rise living.
Advocates of apartment blocks point chiefly to location and efficiency. A central tower places residents within walking distance of work, shops and entertainment, sparing them the long commute. Building upwards also conserves precious land, allowing many families to share a small footprint, which in turn supports the dense, walkable neighbourhoods that thriving cities need. For the busy and the sociable, vertical living is simply practical.
Those who prefer suburban houses, by contrast, prize space and tranquillity. A house typically offers a garden, more rooms and freedom from noisy neighbours, an environment many consider far healthier for raising children. Suburbs also foster a stronger sense of community and ownership that anonymous high-rise corridors rarely match. The trade-off, of course, is dependence on the car and a daily journey into the city.
Weighing these positions, I favour high-rise living, largely on environmental grounds. While suburban houses are undeniably comfortable, their sprawl devours land, lengthens commutes and locks residents into car use. Compact apartment towers, when designed with parks and amenities nearby, deliver convenience and sustainability together, an outcome the suburbs struggle to provide.
Examiner’s notes
- Task Response: both views are explored even-handedly and a clear personal opinion, favouring high-rise on environmental grounds, is stated in the introduction and developed in the final paragraph.
- Coherence and Cohesion: balanced framing with 'Advocates of apartment blocks…' and 'Those who prefer suburban houses, by contrast…' creates a clean discuss-both-views structure.
- Lexical Resource: precise contrasts such as 'a small footprint', 'sprawl devours land' and 'convenience and sustainability together' show flexible, idiomatic phrasing.