Band 9 model answer
Staging a global spectacle like the Olympic Games commits a host nation to colossal expenditure on stadiums, transport infrastructure and elaborate security. Opinion is sharply divided over whether this represents shrewd, far-sighted investment or reckless extravagance, and on balance I lean firmly towards scepticism.
Proponents understandably emphasise the lasting legacy such events can leave behind. New transport links, regenerated districts and upgraded sporting facilities may serve local communities for decades, while the intense global exposure can boost both tourism and trade. Beyond pure economics, hosting can foster national pride and unite an entire population behind a single shared endeavour, generating intangible benefits that no conventional balance sheet ever fully captures.
Nevertheless, the historical record gives ample cause for caution. Budgets routinely spiral far beyond their initial estimates, saddling ordinary taxpayers with crippling debt, and many purpose-built venues become costly 'white elephants' that quietly decay once the crowds disperse. Montreal took three full decades to repay its 1976 Games, and several former Olympic stadiums now stand derelict. The promised tourism windfall frequently fails to materialise, and the vast sums involved might have funded hospitals or schools with far greater certainty of return.
In conclusion, while a meticulously planned event can occasionally deliver genuine and durable benefits, the accumulated evidence suggests that the costs too often outweigh the eventual rewards. I therefore believe that, unless a city can sensibly repurpose existing facilities and guarantee disciplined budgeting, the enormous price tag of hosting the Olympics is exceedingly difficult to justify, and the money would usually be better directed towards more pressing public needs.
Examiner’s notes
- Task Response: both views are developed with concrete support and the writer's qualified opinion ('I lean towards scepticism') is consistent from introduction to conclusion.
- Cohesion: the essay deploys substitution and example signposting ('Montreal took three decades') so evidence is woven in rather than listed, sustaining a fluent argument.
- Lexical resource: striking terms like 'reckless extravagance', 'white elephants' and 'tourism windfall' show idiomatic precision rarely seen below Band 9.