Band 9 model answer
In an age dominated by presentations, interviews and online video, the capacity to address an audience with confidence is increasingly prized. I broadly agree that public-speaking is a vital skill and that schools should teach it deliberately rather than leaving it to chance.
The practical case is strong. In almost every profession, success depends not only on having good ideas but on being able to communicate them persuasively, whether a doctor reassuring a patient or an entrepreneur pitching to investors. Those who freeze before an audience may see their talents overlooked, while articulate colleagues advance. Equally, public speaking nurtures wider qualities such as clear thinking, self-assurance and the ability to structure an argument, all of which serve students for life. A confident speaker is also better equipped to participate actively in civic and democratic debate.
Because these abilities can genuinely be taught, schools are the natural setting to develop them. Confidence at the podium rarely appears spontaneously; it grows through repeated, supported practice in a forgiving environment. By incorporating debates, presentations and structured feedback into the curriculum, schools could spare countless young people the crippling anxiety that public speaking otherwise provokes, and could do so most effectively before fear becomes entrenched in adulthood. Leaving the skill to chance, by contrast, tends to advantage only those already comfortable in the spotlight.
That said, I would temper the claim that it is the single most important skill, since literacy, numeracy and empathy are surely no less essential. My position, therefore, is that public speaking deserves a firm place in education as one indispensable competence among several. Taught early and practised regularly, it equips students with a tool that will repay them throughout their academic, professional and civic lives.
Examiner’s notes
- Task Response: the writer agrees with a sensible qualification ('I would temper the claim that it is the single most important'), engaging precisely with the strong wording of the prompt.
- Coherence: paragraphs progress logically from why the skill matters, to why schools should teach it, to a measured final judgement, giving the essay a clear argumentative arc.
- Lexical Resource: vivid, accurate phrasing such as 'freeze before an audience', 'crippling anxiety' and 'become entrenched' demonstrates a strong, natural lexical range.