Band 9 model answer
How best to allocate limited transport budgets is a perennial dilemma, and opinion divides sharply between those who favour investment in cycling facilities and those who would prioritise roads for motor vehicles. Having weighed both arguments, I believe funding cycling infrastructure offers the greater long-term return.
Supporters of road spending make a pragmatic case. The majority of journeys, particularly in rural regions and for the transport of goods, still depend on cars and lorries, so well-maintained roads keep the economy moving and reduce dangerous bottlenecks. Neglecting this network, they argue, simply shifts congestion and accidents elsewhere, harming businesses that rely on reliable deliveries and commuters who have no practical alternative to driving.
Those who champion cycling, however, point to compounding benefits that roads cannot match. Dedicated lanes encourage a shift away from cars, easing congestion at its source while cutting emissions and improving public health, which in turn lowers the strain on healthcare systems. Cycling infrastructure is also remarkably cheap to build and maintain compared with motorways, meaning even modest budgets can transform how a city moves and free up road space for the vehicles that genuinely need it. Cities such as Copenhagen demonstrate that safe, segregated lanes can make cycling the default choice for short trips, easing pressure on buses and trains at the same time.
In my opinion, while roads remain indispensable for freight and longer journeys, governments should tilt new investment towards cycling, since it addresses congestion, pollution and ill health simultaneously and at a relatively low cost. The most enlightened policy is not to choose one over the other outright, but to rebalance spending so that cyclists are no longer treated as an afterthought in transport planning.
Examiner’s notes
- Task Response: both views are developed even-handedly in separate paragraphs before a clearly reasoned personal opinion, exactly satisfying the 'discuss both views' instruction.
- Cohesion: paragraph openers ('Supporters of road spending', 'Those who champion cycling, however') signal the shift in viewpoint and guide the reader smoothly.
- Lexical resource: phrases like 'compounding benefits', 'segregated lanes' and 'treated as an afterthought' show idiomatic precision typical of Band 9.