Band 9 model answer
Across the world, governments are offering incentives and tightening regulations to accelerate the transition from petrol-powered cars to electric vehicles. This shift brings clear environmental rewards, yet it is accompanied by practical and social complications that deserve honest scrutiny.
The foremost advantage is cleaner air. Because electric cars produce no exhaust emissions, replacing combustion engines markedly reduces the pollutants that cause respiratory illness in cities and the carbon dioxide that drives climate change. A further benefit is energy independence: nations that rely on imported oil can power their fleets from domestic electricity, including renewables, insulating their economies from volatile fuel markets and geopolitical shocks. Drivers, meanwhile, enjoy quieter, cheaper and lower-maintenance journeys once the initial purchase is made.
The disadvantages, however, should not be downplayed. Electric vehicles remain expensive to buy, placing them beyond the reach of many ordinary households and risking a two-tier system of mobility in which only the affluent benefit. The charging network is still patchy in rural and poorer areas, breeding anxiety about running out of power on long trips and discouraging hesitant buyers from switching. Moreover, manufacturing batteries consumes scarce minerals extracted under questionable conditions, so the technology is far from environmentally faultless. These mineral supply chains also concentrate strategic power in a handful of exporting countries.
On balance, the move towards electric vehicles offers substantial benefits in air quality and energy security that justify continued support, even though affordability, charging gaps and battery production pose genuine challenges. Provided governments invest in infrastructure and cleaner supply chains, the advantages of this transition should ultimately eclipse its drawbacks.
Examiner’s notes
- Task Response: both advantages and disadvantages are addressed in roughly equal depth, with a measured concluding judgement that fulfils the two-part question.
- Cohesion: signposting such as 'The foremost advantage', 'The disadvantages, however' and 'On balance' organises the contrast transparently for the reader.
- Lexical resource: vocabulary like 'volatile fuel markets', 'two-tier system' and 'environmentally faultless' demonstrates wide-ranging, accurate lexis.