Animals & Wildlife

Stricter Animal Welfare Laws

The question
Some people argue that current laws protecting animals are too weak and should be made much stricter, with harsher punishments for cruelty. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Band 9 model answer

Public concern over the treatment of animals has grown markedly, prompting calls for far tougher legislation against cruelty. I strongly agree that animal welfare laws in many countries remain inadequate and that both their scope and their penalties ought to be substantially strengthened.

The principal justification is that existing laws frequently fail to deter abuse. In numerous jurisdictions, those convicted of mistreating animals face trivial fines or suspended sentences that scarcely reflect the gravity of the act. When punishment is negligible, it offers little discouragement to offenders, and the law's protective purpose is undermined. Harsher penalties, including meaningful imprisonment for serious cruelty, would signal that society regards such conduct as a genuine crime rather than a minor transgression.

Stricter regulation is also warranted because many forms of suffering currently fall outside legal protection altogether. Intensive farming practices, neglect and the exotic-pet trade often operate within loopholes that weak statutes leave unaddressed. Extending the law to cover these areas, and resourcing inspectors to enforce it, would close gaps through which considerable cruelty presently escapes. Crucially, robust enforcement matters as much as the wording of the rules themselves.

That said, legislation alone cannot transform attitudes, so stricter laws should be paired with public education that cultivates compassion from childhood. Nevertheless, the law sets the moral baseline a society is prepared to enforce, and at present that baseline is set too low. For this reason, I firmly believe that strengthening animal welfare laws, and the punishments that back them, is both justified and overdue.

Examiner’s notes

Power words for this topic

deter
to discourage someone from acting through fear of consequences
In a sentenceWeak fines fail to deter animal cruelty.
negligible
so small as to be hardly worth considering
In a sentenceNegligible penalties offer little protection.
loophole
a gap in the law allowing rules to be evaded
In a sentenceThe exotic-pet trade exploits legal loopholes.
transgression
an act that breaks a law or moral rule
In a sentenceCruelty should not be treated as a minor transgression.