Band 9 model answer
As the environmental footprint of livestock becomes ever clearer, some campaigners increasingly urge a universal switch to plant-based diets. Although I genuinely sympathise with the goals behind this proposal, I believe that mandating vegetarianism for everyone is impractical, and that encouraging widespread moderation offers a far wiser and more achievable path.
The argument for widespread plant-based eating is environmentally robust. Rearing livestock consumes vast quantities of land, water and feed while emitting significant greenhouse gases, so reducing meat consumption could substantially shrink humanity's overall ecological impact. A plant-based diet also spares billions of animals from the routine suffering of industrial farming. For committed advocates, these compelling benefits clearly justify a sweeping change in how the entire world eats.
Critics, however, rightly highlight the unrealistic nature of universal conversion. Meat is deeply woven into countless cultures, cuisines and economies, and abrupt abstinence would inevitably meet fierce resistance. In some regions, livestock thrives on marginal land unsuitable for crops and provides indispensable nutrition and livelihoods. Imposing a single rigid dietary template across such diverse circumstances ignores both human nature and local realities, rendering the proposal politically and practically untenable.
My own view therefore occupies the middle ground. The environmental and ethical advantages of eating less meat are simply too significant to dismiss, yet expecting global veganism is naive. The most effective response is to promote a marked reduction in meat consumption rather than its outright elimination, supported by clear labelling, affordable plant-based alternatives and sustained public education. Such pragmatic moderation, adopted by many, would deliver far greater real-world benefit than an absolute rule rejected by most.
Examiner’s notes
- Task Response: both perspectives are fully developed and the writer stakes out a clear, defensible middle position ('reduction... rather than its outright elimination').
- Coherence and Cohesion: logical progression from environmental case, to objections, to a reconciling view, with cohesive phrases like 'My own view occupies the middle ground'.
- Lexical Resource: precise environmental lexis such as 'ecological impact', 'greenhouse gases' and 'plant-based alternatives' is used naturally and accurately.