Band 9 model answer
Whether the public should pay to view a nation's cultural treasures is a question that divides opinion sharply. Although charging admission has obvious financial appeal, I am convinced that free entry serves society far more effectively.
Advocates of admission fees argue, reasonably, that museums are expensive to run. Conserving fragile artefacts, paying expert staff and mounting new exhibitions all demand substantial sums, and a ticket price provides a dependable income stream that reduces dependence on the public purse. Charging may also limit overcrowding, ensuring that those who do attend can appreciate the collections in relative calm rather than amid a relentless crowd.
Those who favour free access, however, advance a more compelling case rooted in equality. A museum funded by taxpayers ought to be open to all of them, not merely to those who can spare the entrance fee. When admission is free, families on modest incomes, students and the simply curious are far more likely to wander in, and repeated, casual visits do more to build cultural appreciation than a single costly outing. Heritage, on this view, is a common inheritance rather than a commodity to be sold.
Weighing these arguments, I side firmly with free entry, though with one qualification. Permanent collections, which embody the shared culture of a country, should cost nothing to visit, while temporary blockbuster exhibitions may justifiably carry a charge to recover their exceptional costs. Such a hybrid model preserves the democratic principle of open access while keeping institutions financially viable. Ultimately, a society that locks its art behind a turnstile risks turning culture into a privilege rather than a right.
Examiner’s notes
- Task Response: both views are examined in balanced, well-evidenced paragraphs and the writer's opinion is clear from the outset and refined into a nuanced hybrid solution, fully addressing the discuss-and-opinion task.
- Coherence and Cohesion: contrast between paragraphs is handled with 'however' mid-sentence and the verb 'Weighing these arguments' to introduce the conclusion, avoiding repetitive linking words.
- Lexical Resource: vivid and precise choices such as 'a common inheritance rather than a commodity', 'blockbuster exhibitions' and 'behind a turnstile' show range and stylistic control.