Band 9 model answer
Whether safeguarding the planet's astonishing diversity of life deserves priority over economic growth is among the defining dilemmas of our era. While prosperity is a legitimate aspiration, I am persuaded that protecting biodiversity is the more fundamental concern, since economies ultimately rest upon the living systems it sustains.
Those who privilege economic development advance understandable reasons. For nations struggling with poverty, exploiting natural resources offers the swiftest route to jobs, infrastructure and rising living standards. Halting a profitable mine or plantation to protect an obscure species can appear an unaffordable indulgence when so many people lack basic necessities. From this perspective, growth must come first, with conservation deferred until wealth makes it feasible.
Yet this reasoning underestimates how profoundly humanity depends on the natural world. Diverse ecosystems pollinate crops, purify water, regulate the climate and supply the raw materials for countless medicines, services worth trillions that no economy could replace. The loss of even seemingly minor species can trigger cascading collapses that devastate the very industries growth relies upon. Far from being a luxury, therefore, biodiversity is the foundation on which lasting prosperity is built.
In my judgement, the apparent conflict between nature and the economy is largely illusory. Short-term gains achieved by ravaging ecosystems are routinely cancelled out by long-term losses, whereas conservation secures the natural capital future generations will need. Wise policy should pursue development that works with biodiversity rather than against it, recognising that protecting life on Earth is not opposed to prosperity but essential to it.
Examiner’s notes
- Task Response: both views are examined and a firm opinion is given ('biodiversity is the more fundamental concern'), justified with developed reasoning rather than assertion.
- Lexical Resource: high-level abstract vocabulary such as 'cascading collapses', 'natural capital' and 'an unaffordable indulgence' demonstrates range and precision.
- Grammatical Range and Accuracy: long, complex sentences listing ecosystem services are punctuated and structured accurately, showing strong control.