Band 9 model answer
The question of whether flexible scheduling should be a universal right or a discretionary perk has gained urgency as work and home life increasingly overlap. Both camps raise valid points, which I examine before offering my own position.
Supporters of mandatory flexibility argue that it transforms employees' quality of life. By choosing when they start and finish, parents can manage the school run, carers can attend appointments and individuals can work at the times they feel most productive. Such autonomy tends to reduce stress, lower absenteeism and strengthen loyalty, meaning that staff are far more likely to repay the trust extended to them with greater commitment and effort. From this perspective, flexibility benefits worker and employer alike.
Critics, however, warn that compelling every business to comply could cause real harm. Some operations, such as factories, hospitals and shops, depend on staff being present at fixed times, and scattered schedules may disrupt teamwork or leave customers unserved. Small firms in particular may lack the resources to coordinate complex arrangements, and a blanket legal requirement could impose costs they cannot absorb. Flexibility, in short, is not equally feasible everywhere.
Weighing these arguments, I believe employers should be strongly encouraged, but not universally forced, to offer flexible hours. Where the nature of the work permits, flexibility brings clear mutual gains and ought to be the default. Yet a rigid law ignoring the realities of certain industries would do more harm than good. The sensible middle course is to require employers to consider flexible requests seriously and in good faith, granting them wherever practical, thereby balancing the genuine needs of staff against the legitimate operational demands of the business.
Examiner’s notes
- Task Response: both views are explored fairly and a qualified opinion ('encouraged, but not universally forced') resolves the debate with clear reasoning.
- Coherence and Cohesion: the structure pivots cleanly on 'Critics, however' and 'Weighing these arguments', giving the essay a transparent and logical shape.
- Lexical Resource: discerning vocabulary such as 'discretionary perk', 'lower absenteeism' and 'blanket legal requirement' shows precise, natural usage.