Band 9 model answer
The rise of the gig economy, in which individuals piece together income from short assignments and freelance gigs, has reshaped how millions earn a living. Despite the freedom it offers, I believe its disadvantages ultimately outweigh its benefits for most workers.
Undeniably, gig work carries appeal. It grants people the liberty to choose when and how much they work, which suits students, carers and those seeking a second income. Skilled freelancers can also command attractive rates and handpick projects that match their interests, escaping the monotony of a fixed office routine and a single overbearing boss. For businesses, meanwhile, hiring on demand keeps costs flexible and responsive to fluctuating workloads.
These gains, however, come at a considerable price. Gig workers typically forfeit the safeguards that permanent staff take for granted: paid leave, sick pay, pensions and any meaningful protection against sudden dismissal. Income is often unpredictable, making it difficult to plan or secure a mortgage, and the absence of a guaranteed wage can generate chronic anxiety. Furthermore, the burden of training and equipment frequently falls on the individual rather than the employer, eroding their effective earnings.
On balance, while the flexibility of gig work is genuinely valuable, the lack of stability and basic entitlements leaves too many people vulnerable. The advantages tend to favour the highly skilled or those with another financial cushion, whereas the disadvantages press hardest on the least secure. Unless governments extend stronger protections to freelance workers, I am convinced that the social costs of this model outweigh its individual rewards, and society would be wise to temper its initial enthusiasm with sensible, carefully targeted regulation that preserves flexibility while restoring basic security.
Examiner’s notes
- Task Response: the position that disadvantages outweigh advantages is announced early and consistently defended, with a nuanced acknowledgement that benefits favour a privileged minority.
- Coherence and Cohesion: contrastive transitions ('Undeniably', 'These gains, however', 'On balance') guide the reader through a clear concession-then-rebuttal structure.
- Lexical Resource: precise lexis like 'forfeit the safeguards', 'chronic anxiety' and 'temper its enthusiasm' signals sophisticated, idiomatic control.