Band 9 model answer
How long a person should remain in a single role has become a contested question as labour markets grow more fluid. While loyalty to one employer has its merits, I believe that periodically changing careers is, on the whole, the wiser path.
Those who advocate a job for life point to the security and depth it brings. An employee who stays with one organisation accumulates institutional knowledge, builds trusted relationships and often rises steadily through the ranks. Such stability can be deeply reassuring, particularly for those supporting families or repaying a mortgage, and long service is frequently rewarded with generous pensions and seniority that newcomers simply cannot match.
Nevertheless, the case for moving on is increasingly compelling. Changing roles exposes individuals to fresh challenges, new skills and broader professional networks, all of which enhance employability in an uncertain and rapidly shifting economy. It also guards against stagnation: someone who has performed the same tasks for decades may find their expertise outdated when industries are transformed by technology. Variety, in short, keeps both ambition and competence alive.
Weighing these positions, I lean firmly towards the value of mobility. Although stability offers comfort, the modern workplace rewards adaptability, and clinging to one post can leave a worker exposed if that role disappears. A sensible compromise is to commit fully to each job while remaining open to change when growth stalls. In this way, individuals enjoy the rootedness of belonging without surrendering the resilience that comes from reinvention, and they avoid the complacency that long tenure can quietly breed. Ultimately, a varied and deliberate career equips people far better for a turbulent world in which the only genuine constant is change itself.
Examiner’s notes
- Task Response: both views are developed even-handedly before a decisive personal opinion ('I lean firmly towards the value of mobility') is sustained to the end.
- Coherence and Cohesion: ideas progress logically with referencing devices like 'Such stability' and 'these positions', avoiding repetitive linking phrases.
- Lexical Resource: topic-specific phrasing such as 'institutional knowledge', 'guards against stagnation' and 'rootedness of belonging' shows a wide and flexible range.