Band 9 model answer
English has become the default medium of international business, science and diplomacy, a development that excites enthusiasts and alarms linguists in equal measure. Although the loss of linguistic diversity is a genuine concern, I believe the practical benefits of a shared global language clearly outweigh its drawbacks.
The advantages are considerable. A common tongue dramatically lowers the barriers to collaboration, allowing researchers, traders and travellers from disparate backgrounds to communicate without costly translation. Knowledge circulates faster when a single language carries it, accelerating innovation in medicine and technology. For individuals, fluency in English often unlocks education and employment that would otherwise be inaccessible, functioning as a powerful instrument of social mobility.
The principal disadvantage is the pressure placed on smaller languages, which can be sidelined when prestige and opportunity attach to English alone. Where children are educated solely in a global tongue, ancestral languages may erode within a generation, taking with them distinctive ways of seeing the world. This danger is real, yet it is not inevitable. Multilingualism is perfectly attainable, and many societies successfully maintain their mother tongue while adopting English as a second language for wider communication. The threat, in other words, stems less from English itself than from neglectful language policy.
In conclusion, while the ascendancy of English does place vulnerable languages under strain, the gains in mutual understanding, economic opportunity and scientific progress are too substantial to dismiss. With thoughtful protection of minority languages, the world can enjoy the benefits of a lingua franca without sacrificing its rich linguistic heritage.
Examiner’s notes
- Task Response: the essay directly answers the advantages-outweigh question with a quantified judgement ('clearly outweigh'), weighing concrete benefits against the single key disadvantage before reaffirming the position.
- Coherence and Cohesion: ideas progress logically from advantages to disadvantages to rebuttal, linked by phrases like 'The principal disadvantage' and 'in other words' that clarify the line of argument.
- Lexical Resource: sophisticated terms such as 'lingua franca', 'social mobility' and 'ascendancy' are deployed accurately and add register-appropriate precision.