Band 9 model answer
Pursuits such as free climbing and base jumping carry an undeniable risk of death, prompting calls for them to be restricted or outlawed altogether. While I sympathise with concern for human life, I disagree that these activities should be banned, provided participants are fully informed adults.
The foundation of my position is personal liberty. In a free society, competent adults are entitled to make their own choices about how they spend their lives and bodies, even when those choices appear reckless to others. We readily accept comparable risks in mountaineering, motor racing and military service, so singling out extreme sports for prohibition would be inconsistent. Furthermore, many practitioners are not careless thrill-seekers but meticulous athletes who train rigorously and manage danger with remarkable expertise.
That said, the objections cannot be dismissed entirely. Fatalities devastate families, and rescue operations can endanger the lives of others while consuming public resources. There is also a worry that glamorising peril encourages inexperienced imitators to attempt feats beyond their ability. These concerns are valid, yet they justify regulation rather than outright prohibition.
In conclusion, the sensible response is not to ban extreme sports but to govern them responsibly through licensing, mandatory training and insurance that covers rescue costs. Such measures protect both participants and the wider public while preserving individual freedom. Banning these pursuits would be paternalistic and futile, since determined enthusiasts would simply continue underground. I therefore firmly believe that informed personal risk, properly managed, is a liberty a mature society should uphold rather than forbid.
Examiner’s notes
- Task Response: the 'to what extent' question receives a clear disagreement, qualified with sensible conditions, and the regulation-not-prohibition solution shows mature reasoning.
- Cohesion: concessive transitions 'That said' and 'yet they justify regulation rather than' integrate the opposing view, sustaining a debate rather than a list.
- Lexical resource: targeted vocabulary including 'thrill-seekers', 'glamorising peril' and 'paternalistic and futile' demonstrates wide lexical range and precision.