Band 9 model answer
A perennial dilemma facing every government is whether to fund generous public services through higher taxation or to leave more money in citizens' pockets. While the appeal of lower taxes is understandable, I largely agree that the state should guarantee essential services even at the cost of a heavier tax burden.
The strongest argument for funded provision is fairness. Healthcare and education are not luxuries but the foundations of a decent life, and making them free at the point of use ensures that the poorest are not excluded by an inability to pay. A child's prospects should not hinge on a parent's bank balance, nor should the sick be left untreated because they cannot afford a doctor. Universal services, paid for collectively, embody a basic social solidarity that markets alone cannot deliver.
There is also a compelling economic case. A healthy, well-educated population is more productive and innovative, repaying the original investment through higher output and reduced long-term costs. Preventive medicine, for instance, is far cheaper than treating advanced disease, while widespread literacy fuels the skilled workforce that prosperity depends upon. In this sense, taxation funding such services is less a drain than a shrewd national investment.
That said, I would not endorse limitless spending. Excessive taxation can blunt incentives and drive away enterprise, so governments must spend efficiently and tax proportionately. The objective should be a sustainable system, not an unaffordable one. On balance, however, the social and economic benefits of guaranteed healthcare and education decisively justify the taxes required to provide them, making such provision a hallmark of any responsible and humane state.
Examiner’s notes
- Task Response: a clear degree of agreement ('largely agree') is stated early and defended throughout, with a fair acknowledgement of limits that strengthens rather than weakens the stance.
- Coherence and Cohesion: arguments progress logically from fairness to economics to caveat, linked by phrases such as 'There is also' and 'That said', creating smooth development.
- Lexical Resource: economic-political lexis like 'free at the point of use', 'social solidarity', 'blunt incentives' and 'shrewd national investment' is accurate and varied.