Band 9 model answer
A number of democracies, from Australia to Belgium, fine citizens who fail to cast a ballot. While critics regard this as an infringement on personal liberty, I believe the benefits of obligatory participation clearly surpass its drawbacks.
The principal advantage is legitimacy. When turnout is near universal, the resulting government can genuinely claim to represent the whole electorate rather than a vocal minority. This discourages parties from courting only their core supporters and pushes them towards broad, moderate policies. A further gain is civic engagement, since the duty to vote prompts people to inform themselves about candidates they might otherwise ignore. In this way, mandatory voting can gradually deepen a population's political literacy.
The drawbacks, by contrast, are comparatively modest. Opponents argue that forcing the disengaged to the polls produces uninformed or random choices that distort outcomes. There is also the philosophical objection that compelling participation contradicts the freedom a democracy is meant to protect. These concerns are legitimate, yet they can be softened: a small fine is hardly tyranny, and ballots can include an abstention option that records dissent without penalising it. The supposed flood of careless votes, meanwhile, tends to be exaggerated by those who simply dislike the result.
On balance, the case for compulsory voting is persuasive. The democratic dividends of higher legitimacy and a more politically aware citizenry decisively outweigh a minor restriction on choice and the risk of a few thoughtless ballots. Governments seeking to combat apathy and strengthen the mandate behind their decisions would therefore be wise to consider making the ballot box a shared obligation rather than an optional privilege.
Examiner’s notes
- Task Response: the position is unambiguous from the introduction ('clearly surpass') and sustained through a weighing of advantages against drawbacks, fully addressing the 'outweigh' question type.
- Coherence and Cohesion: paragraphs are signposted by function ('The principal advantage', 'The drawbacks, by contrast', 'On balance'), giving the essay a logical, easy-to-follow progression.
- Lexical Resource: precise topic lexis such as 'legitimacy', 'electorate', 'abstention' and 'political literacy' is used accurately and without repetition.