Band 9 model answer
Who should decide on matters such as schools, transport and housing, distant national ministers or nearby local councils, is a longstanding constitutional question. Both levels of government have strengths, and the right answer depends largely on the nature of the decision at hand.
Those who champion local control emphasise proximity and responsiveness. Councils understand the particular needs of their area, from traffic blackspots to the demand for community housing, in a way that a remote capital cannot. Local decision-makers are also more visible and accountable to the residents affected, who can readily lobby or vote them out. This closeness, supporters argue, produces policies that fit real circumstances rather than abstract national averages.
Advocates of central authority counter that some issues demand uniformity and scale. Defence, healthcare standards and environmental regulation cannot be left to vary wildly from district to district without creating inequality and confusion. A national government can also pool resources to support poorer regions that lack the tax base to fund services themselves. Without such coordination, they warn, fragmentation would entrench a postcode lottery in which a citizen's rights depend on where they happen to live.
In my view, neither tier should monopolise decision-making; the wisest arrangement allocates each according to its strengths. Matters of national consequence, such as universal standards and redistribution, belong with central government, whereas decisions rooted in local knowledge are best devolved. This principle, sometimes called subsidiarity, ensures that power sits at the lowest level capable of exercising it effectively. Far from being a compromise, such a division harnesses the responsiveness of local councils and the reach of central authority simultaneously.
Examiner’s notes
- Task Response: both the local and central positions are developed with concrete examples, and the conclusion offers a principled resolution ('subsidiarity') rather than vague balance.
- Lexical Resource: governance vocabulary including 'devolved', 'subsidiarity', 'postcode lottery' and 'redistribution' shows command of the topic register.
- Coherence and Cohesion: the essay sustains a clear local-versus-central thread, with the conclusion explicitly tying both strands together ('harnesses ... simultaneously').