Band 9 model answer
The right to speak freely is celebrated as a cornerstone of democracy, yet how far it should extend remains deeply controversial. Some defend an unlimited right to express any opinion, whereas others accept that certain speech must be curbed. I am persuaded that freedom of expression, while precious, cannot be wholly without limits.
Advocates of absolute free speech make a powerful case. They argue that open debate is the only reliable mechanism for exposing error and holding power to account; once a government can silence one idea, it acquires a dangerous tool to silence dissent more broadly. History offers ample warning, as repressive regimes have long used censorship to entrench themselves. For these reasons, even offensive or unpopular views, they claim, deserve protection.
Those who favour limits respond that words can cause concrete harm. Incitement to violence, slander and the deliberate spread of dangerous falsehoods can ruin reputations, endanger lives and undermine public health. A society that tolerates speech designed to threaten or terrorise minorities, they contend, protects the powerful at the expense of the vulnerable. On this reasoning, narrowly defined restrictions are not censorship but a defence of others' rights.
My own position favours robust freedom tempered by carefully drawn boundaries. The presumption must always be in favour of expression, since the cure for bad ideas is better arguments, not silence. However, speech that directly incites violence or knowingly endangers others crosses a line that any responsible state may police. Such limits should be exceptional, transparent and subject to independent review, so that the principle of free speech is safeguarded rather than gradually eroded.
Examiner’s notes
- Task Response: the essay weighs the absolutist and restrictionist positions fairly before defending a clear, qualified opinion ('robust freedom tempered by carefully drawn boundaries').
- Coherence and Cohesion: ideas flow through logical connectors ('whereas', 'On this reasoning', 'However') and a consistent thread linking harm, rights and democratic accountability.
- Lexical Resource: precise legal and political terms such as 'incitement', 'slander', 'censorship' and 'presumption' are deployed accurately and naturally.