Band 9 model answer
Funding public transport is a contentious issue, with some arguing that the entire population should contribute through higher taxes, and others insisting that only passengers should foot the bill. After weighing both positions, I believe broad taxpayer funding is the fairer and more far-sighted approach.
Those who favour user-pays funding appeal to a sense of individual fairness. Why, they ask, should a person who never boards a bus subsidise the journeys of others through their taxes? Charging passengers directly, they contend, ties cost to consumption and discourages wasteful over-provision of routes that few people actually use, keeping the system financially disciplined.
Proponents of general taxation, by contrast, emphasise the collective benefits that good transport confers on everyone, whether or not they use it personally. Reliable buses and trains reduce road congestion, clean the air and connect workers to employers, advantages that ripple through the entire economy. Crucially, funding the network from taxes keeps fares low, ensuring that the poorest citizens are not priced out of mobility. Since affordable transport underpins access to jobs, education and healthcare, it is reasonable to treat it as a public good rather than a private commodity.
In my view, although the user-pays principle has a superficial appeal, public transport generates such widespread social and economic benefits that society as a whole should share the cost. A modest tax contribution from all, combined with low fares for users, strikes the right balance between fairness and the common good, making transport accessible to everyone who needs it.
Examiner’s notes
- Task Response: both funding models are explored thoroughly before a decisive, well-justified opinion, exactly as the discuss-both-views task demands.
- Cohesion: contrasting paragraph frames ('Those who favour user-pays', 'Proponents of general taxation, by contrast') keep the two positions distinct and balanced.
- Lexical resource: economic vocabulary such as 'over-provision', 'ripple through the entire economy', 'public good' and 'private commodity' signals Band 9 precision.