Band 9 model answer
With answers to almost any question available within seconds, some commentators worry that the internet is eroding our capacity for independent thought. While this concern is not without foundation, I largely disagree, believing that the technology's effect on intelligence depends on how it is used.
There is some truth to the pessimistic view. When facts can be retrieved instantly, people may stop committing knowledge to memory or pause to reason for themselves, a tendency sometimes called cognitive offloading. Furthermore, search engines and social feeds increasingly filter information, nudging users toward effortless agreement rather than careful analysis. In this sense, convenience can indeed breed intellectual laziness.
Nevertheless, I find the claim overstated. The internet has democratised knowledge on an unprecedented scale, granting ordinary people access to academic research, expert debate and diverse perspectives once reserved for the privileged. Used critically, it sharpens thinking by exposing learners to counter-arguments and enabling them to verify claims swiftly. The technology itself is neutral; whether it dulls or develops the mind hinges on the discipline of the user.
In conclusion, while the ease of online information can encourage passive consumption, it equally offers extraordinary opportunities for deeper understanding. Rather than blaming the tool, societies should cultivate the critical-thinking skills needed to use it wisely. For this reason, I disagree that the internet is inevitably making people less able to think.
Examiner’s notes
- Task Response: the response presents a clear, partial position ('largely disagree') and defends it consistently while fairly acknowledging the opposing argument.
- Coherence and Cohesion: balanced transitions 'There is some truth', 'Nevertheless' and 'In conclusion' shift cleanly between concession and rebuttal, aiding readability.
- Lexical Resource: advanced terminology such as 'cognitive offloading', 'democratised knowledge' and 'passive consumption' shows precise, topic-relevant expression.