Band 9 model answer
With roads choked and air quality deteriorating, some commentators contend that the state should cap how many cars each person may own. While I sympathise with the goal, I only partially agree, since outright restrictions on ownership are both impractical and unfair unless preceded by genuine alternatives.
There is undeniable logic to the proposal. Fewer privately owned vehicles would mean lighter traffic, cleaner air and less pressure to pave over land for parking and roads. Cities such as Singapore have used ownership quotas and steep licence fees to keep their streets remarkably free-flowing, demonstrating that the approach can work where it is rigorously enforced, well designed and paired with an excellent transport network.
However, capping ownership treats the symptom rather than the cause and can penalise those with little choice. A family in a poorly served suburb or a remote rural community may depend entirely on a car to reach work, school or hospital, and limiting ownership would simply trap them in isolation while doing nothing to curb the discretionary trips that cause most congestion. Such a policy may also prove unenforceable and politically toxic, breeding resentment and evasion. A far more equitable strategy is to make driving less necessary in the first place, by expanding public transport and discouraging unnecessary trips through congestion charges rather than dictating possession.
In conclusion, although restricting car ownership could reduce congestion and pollution in principle, I believe it is too blunt and inequitable an instrument to impose universally. Governments should instead address the underlying demand for cars by investing in reliable alternatives, reserving direct limits for the most overcrowded cities where superior options already exist.
Examiner’s notes
- Task Response: the nuanced position ('only partially agree') is established early and consistently defended, with conditions clearly specified in the conclusion.
- Coherence: the pivotal sentence 'capping ownership treats the symptom rather than the cause' encapsulates the argument and bridges the two body paragraphs.
- Lexical resource: expressions like 'ownership quotas', 'too blunt and inequitable an instrument' and 'politically toxic' show precise, sophisticated phrasing.