Band 9 model answer
Governments across the world enforce a wage floor below which no employer may legally pay. Whether this safeguard genuinely serves workers or inadvertently undermines them remains contested, and I find the protective case considerably more convincing.
Supporters argue that a statutory minimum shields the most vulnerable from exploitation. In labour markets where workers have little bargaining power, employers can otherwise drive pay to subsistence levels. A legal floor guarantees that full-time work yields a liveable income, lifting families out of poverty, boosting their spending and reducing reliance on state welfare. It also affirms a basic principle of dignity at work.
Critics, by contrast, warn of unintended consequences. If wages are forced above what a job is worth to a business, employers may respond by cutting hours, freezing recruitment or automating roles altogether. On this reasoning, an overly generous minimum could price the least skilled out of work entirely, harming precisely the people it aims to help.
My own view is that the danger is real but overstated. Empirical studies in many economies have found that moderate increases lift incomes with little measurable effect on employment, since better-paid staff are more motivated and less likely to leave. The key lies in calibration: a minimum set sensibly, with reference to local conditions, protects workers without choking job creation. I therefore conclude that a well-judged minimum wage is, on balance, a force for good, and that its risks reflect bad calibration rather than a flaw in the principle itself.
Examiner’s notes
- Task Response: both the protective and the harmful arguments are developed in their own paragraphs, and the opinion is clearly weighted ('considerably more convincing') with a sophisticated final qualification about calibration.
- Coherence and Cohesion: contrast signposts ('Supporters argue', 'Critics, by contrast') and the conclusion's 'The key lies in calibration' bind the argument into a coherent whole.
- Lexical Resource: economic register is handled confidently with 'wage floor', 'subsistence levels' and 'price the least skilled out of work', avoiding repetition through varied synonyms for low pay.