Band 9 model answer
As traffic congestion intensifies, debate centres on whether the remedy lies in constructing additional roads or in managing the demand for the road space we already possess. Having considered both schools of thought, I am firmly persuaded that demand management offers the more durable solution.
Advocates of building more roads rely on an intuitive logic: if congestion arises because too many vehicles compete for too little tarmac, then widening existing routes and adding new ones should ease the squeeze. In rapidly growing regions where infrastructure has genuinely failed to keep pace with population, this argument carries real weight, and targeted construction can unblock chronic pinch points.
Nonetheless, decades of experience expose a stubborn flaw in this reasoning. New roads tend to generate new traffic, a phenomenon known as induced demand, whereby additional capacity simply tempts more people to drive until the network clogs once more. Managing demand instead tackles the root of the problem by encouraging people to travel differently. Congestion charges, investment in public transport, flexible working and cycling provision all reduce the number of cars without the vast expense and environmental destruction that road-building entails.
In conclusion, while expanding the road network may bring temporary relief in genuinely underserved areas, I believe managing demand is the wiser long-term strategy, since building more roads ultimately invites more cars to fill them. Governments would do better to influence how and when people travel than to chase an ever-receding goal of unlimited road capacity.
Examiner’s notes
- Task Response: both approaches are fairly represented and a clear opinion ('firmly persuaded') is sustained, with the conclusion neatly restating the induced-demand argument.
- Cohesion: the contrastive hinge 'Nonetheless, decades of experience expose a stubborn flaw' marks the turn to the writer's preferred view very clearly.
- Lexical resource: the accurate use of the technical concept 'induced demand', alongside 'chronic pinch points' and 'an ever-receding goal', shows Band 9 sophistication.