Band 9 model answer
As foreign productions dominate cinemas and streaming platforms worldwide, debate has intensified over whether governments should shield domestic film and music industries or leave their fate to the open market. Having considered both positions, I believe limited, well-designed protection is justified.
Supporters of free competition argue that audiences should simply choose what they enjoy, and that shielding local producers breeds complacency. Protected industries, they contend, may churn out mediocre work knowing subsidies or quotas guarantee them an audience, whereas open competition forces creators to raise their standards to international levels. Consumers, on this view, benefit from the widest possible choice at the lowest cost.
Those favouring protection, however, point to the cultural stakes. Film and music are not mere commodities; they carry a nation's language, stories and values, and a domestic industry overwhelmed by foreign output may simply vanish, taking that cultural voice with it. Because large foreign studios enjoy enormous budgets, smaller national industries cannot compete on equal terms, so modest support such as funding or local-content quotas can be the difference between survival and extinction. The aim is not to exclude foreign work but to ensure homegrown stories continue to be told.
In my opinion, the cultural argument is the stronger one, though it must be applied with restraint. Excessive protection risks insulating producers from healthy competition, but moderate support that nurtures local talent without banning foreign rivals strikes the right balance. In conclusion, governments are right to safeguard their cultural industries, provided protection encourages quality rather than excusing its absence.
Examiner’s notes
- Task Response: both the free-market and protectionist views are developed in depth before a clear, qualified opinion ('limited, well-designed protection is justified') is stated and defended.
- Coherence and Cohesion: balanced paragraphing with mirrored openers ('Supporters of free competition' / 'Those favouring protection') and the conditional close ('provided protection encourages quality') give the essay coherent symmetry.
- Lexical Resource: economic and cultural terms such as 'subsidies', 'local-content quotas' and 'cultural voice' are integrated naturally, with 'insulating producers from healthy competition' showing figurative control.