Band 9 model answer
A growing number of campaigns demand the return of celebrated artworks and antiquities to the lands that produced them, yet major museums resist. The debate pits the rights of source nations against the value of universal access, and I ultimately favour returning items that were unjustly taken.
Those who argue for keeping objects where they are make a practical and cultural case. Great international museums, they point out, allow millions of visitors from around the world to encounter treasures they could never otherwise see, fostering global understanding. Such institutions also possess the expertise and resources to conserve fragile artefacts, which might be at risk in regions affected by instability or limited funding. On this view, heritage belongs to all of humanity, not to one country alone.
The opposing argument, however, rests on justice and identity. Many of these objects were removed during periods of colonial domination, often through looting or coercion, and their continued display abroad can feel like a lasting wound to the people they were taken from. An artefact is not merely an exhibit; it embodies a nation's history and sense of self, and reuniting it with its homeland can restore dignity and cultural continuity.
Weighing both sides, I believe the manner of acquisition should be decisive. Objects obtained fairly may reasonably remain abroad, perhaps shared through loans, but those seized by force or deception ought to be repatriated. Modern technology and cooperative exhibitions now make it possible to honour both access and ownership. Ultimately, righting historic wrongs matters more than the convenience of those who currently hold the spoils.
Examiner’s notes
- Task Response: both views are fully developed and the opinion is principled and specific ('the manner of acquisition should be decisive'), differentiating fairly acquired from looted objects rather than generalising.
- Coherence and Cohesion: paragraph signposts ('Those who argue', 'The opposing argument, however', 'Weighing both sides') frame the discussion, and 'On this view' compresses reference efficiently.
- Lexical Resource: topic-appropriate vocabulary such as 'antiquities', 'colonial domination', 'repatriated' and the figurative 'a lasting wound' demonstrate range and connotative awareness.