Work & Careers

Starting a Business vs Being Employed

The question
Some people prefer to start their own business, while others would rather work as an employee for an established company. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Band 9 model answer

Whether to launch a venture of one's own or take a salaried position with an existing firm is a choice that shapes the entire course of a working life. Both paths have clear attractions, and below I weigh them before stating my own preference.

Those drawn to entrepreneurship are motivated chiefly by independence. Running a business allows individuals to pursue their own vision, set their own hours and reap the full rewards of their effort rather than enriching a distant employer. The sense of ownership can be deeply fulfilling, and a thriving enterprise may eventually generate wealth far beyond any conventional salary. For ambitious, self-reliant people who crave control over their destiny, this freedom is well worth considerable risk.

Others, however, value the security and structure of employment. A regular wage, paid holidays and a clear career ladder provide stability that is impossible when one's income depends on uncertain sales. Employees can also concentrate on their specialism without shouldering the relentless burdens of accounting, marketing and hiring, and they enjoy the support of colleagues rather than facing every problem alone. For many, this predictability outweighs the allure of being one's own boss.

In my opinion, neither path is universally superior; the right choice depends on temperament and circumstance. Nevertheless, I lean towards employment for most people, since the failure rate of new businesses is high and the stress of entrepreneurship can be punishing. Those with a compelling idea and an appetite for risk should certainly pursue it, but for the majority, building a career within a stable organisation offers a more reliable route to a satisfying and secure working life.

Examiner’s notes

Power words for this topic

entrepreneurship
the activity of setting up a business
In a sentenceEntrepreneurship rewards independence and risk.
self-reliant
depending on one's own abilities
In a sentenceSelf-reliant people thrive running a business.
specialism
a particular area of expertise
In a sentenceEmployees can focus on their specialism.
venture
a new business undertaking involving risk
In a sentenceLaunching a venture demands courage.